Before:
I was getting ready for running; my heart was pounding and I was cheering on for the others that were running.
The Race:
This is me running, all tho it was hard it felt like the best thing ever. ( I came 9th with a blood nose )
After:
The refreshing taste of water drowning down my throat felt like heaven after all that running.
The Day Of Cross Country Came.
I Sat Nervously On The Wettish Grass.
It Was Time For The Year 5 Girls To Go And Do Some Running.
I Was Coming 6 Place But Then I Got A Nose Bleed And It Made Me Go To 9th Place.
The Race Was Soon Over And The Refreshing Taste Of Water Drowning Down My Throat Felt Like Heaven.
great job at cross country What did you come?i hope you had so much fun. From Tayla room 9
ReplyDeleteI wrote what place I came. ( I came 9th )
DeleteEven though you had a blood nose, good running. We like the vocabulary you used, like the word 'heaven', it was very descriptive. Maybe next time use a different font as it was hard to read.
ReplyDeleteOk thanks for the help I changed it
DeleteOk thanks for the help I changed it
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