Twit children

  

One day there were two lovely parents.they had children. There was a boy and a girl. They were so kind then they grew older and grew meaner at the same time. The girl was called Tarin and the boy was called Maz. they had a evile dog called zayn. The dog also had strange teeth with patterns that were stripes with polka dots. he would always chew up your clothes and your slippers. He would try to bite your face off. He gave the mother a broken leg. They also had a chicken that the dog killed and its babys ran onto the road and died. There was also a cat that died of a heart attack. The father had a broken back. They wanted to kill the dog because it was mean and it cost to much to feed. There was no point in keeping the dog.The father chopped off its head and the police caught him doing it and took him to jail. He stayed in jail for only two weeks. That was good for him. The cell was pitch black at night and was freezing he came home and sat on the couch and cried. The two children went to boarding school. The parents soon could afford to go to England and got a car, a house, and a dog called mick. Mick was a border collie and he was really nice. They got rich (it took a while) and had a kid called jenna. She was so kind and loveable she did not grow up to be rich but she got a good job. she turned 16 and got a boyfriend called pete. They adopted a dog called fritz. (that’s a german name)

Jenna had a baby boy called Jonathan. Jonathan had ginger fuzzy hair and he had one TINY tooth popping out. He was born on the 15th of may. He grew up so fast and soon he was 8. His teeth were fully grown but he still had four to come out. He was at primary school and then he was at intermediate then he was at boys high school. Then he was 50. He was growing up so fast. And he was taken to a rest home from when he was 76 till he died. He died when he was 98. Here is where the story ends

Reflection:

I was learning to write a story with punctuation and detail I think I did o.k.