Today we were writing things about a moment in time and it was about the clouds and we were not allowed to say the word clouds heres my story. enjoy
I was gazing up at the fluffy white shapes.
It looks like Cotten Candy but only white.
I was lying on the soft grass.
Seeing all the shapes in the sky was incredible.
I wish iI could have tried to eat some of it.
It might have tasted like whipped cream.
Pouffy animals slowly move in the cool summer breeze.
I thought of many different things to turn the Whipped Cream into.
The cars made all sorts of noises.
And there you go. my story
Hope you enjoyed
I was gazing up at the fluffy white shapes.
It looks like Cotten Candy but only white.
I was lying on the soft grass.
Seeing all the shapes in the sky was incredible.
I wish iI could have tried to eat some of it.
It might have tasted like whipped cream.
Pouffy animals slowly move in the cool summer breeze.
I thought of many different things to turn the Whipped Cream into.
The cars made all sorts of noises.
And there you go. my story
Hope you enjoyed
This is a creative piece of writing describing a moment looking up at the sky Tia. You have used metaphoric language to create an image in your reader's mind. I wonder what descriptive writing you can do next. Can you add a link to the toolkit in your blog post?
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